tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12083480.post8008803521055788262..comments2023-08-29T10:44:45.769-05:00Comments on Sequential Heart: Review - Clockwork Creature: Chapter OneMatthew Jenthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05056568940094648387noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12083480.post-84010803812177865112008-02-20T12:06:00.000-06:002008-02-20T12:06:00.000-06:00This comment has been removed by the author.The Effete Bombhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05300496433340351073noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12083480.post-13035772758606281242007-12-06T16:02:00.000-06:002007-12-06T16:02:00.000-06:00Your use of the passive voice is distracting.Your use of the passive voice is distracting.Doctor Fantastichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01263448413626394090noreply@blogger.com